Good Lillie I likeMaybe a section on your thoughts and also a little more on audience and how they'd be expected to react/feel watching this.For M-E-S, always think about connotations - why that prop/setting, etc.Other than that, very good. Currently a L3 (B), but a few changes (above) and it's an A
Good Lillie I like
ReplyDeleteMaybe a section on your thoughts and also a little more on audience and how they'd be expected to react/feel watching this.
For M-E-S, always think about connotations - why that prop/setting, etc.
Other than that, very good. Currently a L3 (B), but a few changes (above) and it's an A