Thursday, 18 October 2012

1 comment:

  1. Good Lillie I like

    Maybe a section on your thoughts and also a little more on audience and how they'd be expected to react/feel watching this.

    For M-E-S, always think about connotations - why that prop/setting, etc.

    Other than that, very good. Currently a L3 (B), but a few changes (above) and it's an A

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