Decent effort LillieYou might want to go into a little more detail in places. For example, what constitutes 'nice' clothing? Give an example.Good choice of examples but you could find one for every point you make (e.g. natural make up, the props you mention, and so on..)Connotations for props/settings?Themes and sounds far too brief in all areas.Some nice work but too vague in places and lacking the detail required for Level 4.Currently low level 3 (C)
Decent effort Lillie
ReplyDeleteYou might want to go into a little more detail in places. For example, what constitutes 'nice' clothing? Give an example.
Good choice of examples but you could find one for every point you make (e.g. natural make up, the props you mention, and so on..)
Connotations for props/settings?
Themes and sounds far too brief in all areas.
Some nice work but too vague in places and lacking the detail required for Level 4.
Currently low level 3 (C)